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At day break
Whispering winds
Flowing ...
Through my ears
Tears and pain
Nothing more

At the very least
I saw a shard of light
Surrounded ...
By the darkness of my feeling
Sorrow and hatred
Nothing more

Step by step
Inch by inch
A small sound
Louder ...
I cried
I tried
Then it all came back
To the darkness once again
That is all
Nothing more

Night falls
Darkness surrounds me
Moonlight gave way
I followed
Walking ...
Through the endlessness
Nothing more

The narrow path
Leading to the void
Of heart
Of emotions
And of ones true feeling
But there's something else

The light, the warmth
The hope, the chance
In unity ...
Brought back my life
Then it flowed back
Whispering again
It all came back
To where it all started
©2008-2009 ~maximus-alexandros
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I'm not sure what this is about myself. I was trying to point out the sadness and the emptiness, but there's still hope in everything. Maybe you can help translate this for me better ?? :D Well, I guess I hope you can enjoy it as I enjoyed making it.

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The light, the warmth
The hope, the chance
In unity ...
Brought back my life
Then it flowed back
Whispering again
It all came back
To where it all started


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:iconmaximus-alexandros:
maksudnyahh ?? anda suka bgn ituwhh .. ??

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iya

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NatEve

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:iconriola:
uh.. bagus.. even i dun really understand :aww: .. apa maknanya?

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:iconmaximus-alexandros:
makna ny .. gue juga kurang ngerti, asal bikin gituw .. :giggle:

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hmm... udah jalan2 dan melakukan segitu banyak hal, ternyata masih dalem kepompong? kesannya kok rada kasiaan gitu ya? ^^;

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tisha-neko puuunch!!! >w<
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beautiful!

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